tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1858454538187432037.post2057079834208707941..comments2023-05-14T02:13:31.056-07:00Comments on ein klage-himmel: some warmthJames Owenshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07614935078978354375noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1858454538187432037.post-51144083276337645832015-06-20T11:01:24.694-07:002015-06-20T11:01:24.694-07:00the language of these lines suggest to me kissings...the language of these lines suggest to me kissings, <i>This perfect being flung itself unfelt, unhurt/as a breath...</i> !!!<br /><br />and how your thin <i>i</i> has such a presence in the vocabulary of the poem,<i> thin, snipped, ticking, risks, rim, half-inch, birch, shirt.</i> <br /><br />even <i>dark, lacked, words, wakes and warmth</i> suggest mouth))))<br /><br />warmth is such an enticement. thank god for the bodies of worms and shirts, for lovers and language.erinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16636371927224076866noreply@blogger.com